The feedback that I received was very positive but what stuck out to me was that people said I should show a little more enthusiasm. In this pitch I think I added some enthusiasm and it helped make this pitch more convincing.
After watching your video, I definitely think that you showed much more enthusiasm in this video! There was definitely a pizazz tone in the way you presented your idea and yourself. You did a great job in incorporating the feedback into this elevator pitch video, and I also love your idea as well! Here is the link to my blogpost: http://jaryprinent.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3-week-10.html
Dylan, good job seeming more upbeat about your idea which is a good thing. Maybe next time you could do without the hat though. Potential investors might not be so keen on loaning you money if you do not look 100$ presentable, which is dumb in my opinion, but you get my point hopefully. I actually wore a beanie in my video, so maybe dont take my advise. Anyways here is al link to my video http://stephenclegg.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hi Dylan. I really enjoyed your elevator pitch, and the feedback you got from your previous post has definitely improved this one! I saw a lot of effort into what you had to say after looking at the previous post. Feel free to check out my blog post!
Hi Dylan,
ReplyDeleteAfter watching your video, I definitely think that you showed much more enthusiasm in this video! There was definitely a pizazz tone in the way you presented your idea and yourself. You did a great job in incorporating the feedback into this elevator pitch video, and I also love your idea as well!
Here is the link to my blogpost:
http://jaryprinent.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3-week-10.html
Dylan, good job seeming more upbeat about your idea which is a good thing. Maybe next time you could do without the hat though. Potential investors might not be so keen on loaning you money if you do not look 100$ presentable, which is dumb in my opinion, but you get my point hopefully. I actually wore a beanie in my video, so maybe dont take my advise. Anyways here is al link to my video http://stephenclegg.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
ReplyDeleteHi Dylan. I really enjoyed your elevator pitch, and the feedback you got from your previous post has definitely improved this one! I saw a lot of effort into what you had to say after looking at the previous post. Feel free to check out my blog post!
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