The feedback that I received was helpful because it helped me realize that I need to better clarify what it is that I'm actually producing. One of the comments addressed how hard it would be to make this universal such as for cars, houses, rooms, and everything else that uses a key. I just wanted to make sure that I clarify that as of right now that is not the vision of my product, if the initial product is successful it's a way to expand and keep the business growing, but it isn't the initial purpose of the product.
I like your product and you do a great job of explaining what your product is! Now your pitch was solid, but I think you could of acted a bit more excited when explaining the product! If you would like to check out my pitch feel free! http://dillondunn.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2-dillon-dunn.html
I enjoyed watching your pitch. I like how you improved your second pitch by using the comments you received on your first pitch. I think you spoke with confidence. I also think this is a great idea. I would definitely use this product.
Please check out my post at: http://prosper95.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hey, Dylan! I think that your idea needs some work because some cars and even houses have codes or apps already to unlock them. You did a fantastic job on your delivery though. You can check out my second elevator pitch at http://tristansentblog.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html.
Hi Dylan, your idea is great, I hope you can further develop it to scooters for example. One thing that you could work on is the delivery of pitch, maybe try to be a little bit more enthusiastic. Other than that, I think you explained the idea very well and it’s a great place to start form. If you have time, check out my pitch at http://janswitkowski.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
I like your product and you do a great job of explaining what your product is! Now your pitch was solid, but I think you could of acted a bit more excited when explaining the product! If you would like to check out my pitch feel free! http://dillondunn.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2-dillon-dunn.html
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching your pitch. I like how you improved your second pitch by using the comments you received on your first pitch. I think you spoke with confidence. I also think this is a great idea. I would definitely use this product.
Please check out my post at: http://prosper95.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
ReplyDeleteHey, Dylan! I think that your idea needs some work because some cars and even houses have codes or apps already to unlock them. You did a fantastic job on your delivery though. You can check out my second elevator pitch at http://tristansentblog.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html.
Hi Dylan, your idea is great, I hope you can further develop it to scooters for example. One thing that you could work on is the delivery of pitch, maybe try to be a little bit more enthusiastic. Other than that, I think you explained the idea very well and it’s a great place to start form. If you have time, check out my pitch at http://janswitkowski.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
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